Finally! *attempts to make mystery novel*

In my previous post, I was writing in 2nd person narrative. I SUCK AT IT. *rage quit* So, I went with 1st person narrative, something I’m actually good at…

In this story, I’m writing a mystery novel. I’ve actually never really wrote any mystery novels. I only just like mystery stuff. So, I went to this site to give me tips on how to write a mystery. I thought it’s really helpful. BUT even though I read it, I probably won’t even write a good mystery in the end. I’M JEST LIEK DAT OHKAY!? 

It’s my first time
This tip is helpful.
ORLY— *gets punched in the face*

Thankfully, this time, I managed to make a full outline before I started writing. Now, I’m writing it and I’m liek EZ PZ. But I got too excited again and made pictures for the game. WHY DO I TEND TO DO THAT UGH. But I at least made the prologue! It’s like, super short though. I already tested it out (game version) and put in some creepy music and I’m like…

NOOOOOOO THIS IS SCARY! HALP ME.
You shouldn’t have put in that creepy music in the first place, dumbass.

Then I text my cousin saying how scared I am but that didn’t make me feel any better… she at least pointed out how hot the weather is today to make me stop thinking about the scariness. She’s so sweet~

So far, I have 1k words…. THAT’S NOT EVEN ENOUGH FOR A DAMN PROLOGUE.
But… it’s a super short story
DON’T “SUPER SHORT STORY” ME!!

I planned for it to be only 10k words. I wonder if I’d even reach that far or if… if it really will be under 10k words? For some reason, it might seem long. It looks like there’s two parts to the game. DAMNIT I DIDN’T WANT DISSSSSsssssS.

But… I’m happy to at least have “something” to write about. Yayness.

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Amipon!? Well ok. New story. AGAIN.

When I visited this site again, I was all liek… WHY DAFAQ DID I NAME THIS SAIT AMIPAWWWNNN!?!?! It’s AMiPON! faggot. Get it right. Ok… UGH. Can i change it again gaiz? NO YOU’RE NOT ALLOWED!!! *cries in a dark corner* I do wonder though… why I put “making games for fun!” as a motto or something. I DIDN’T MAKE GAMES YET, DAMN YOU! AND PLUS. It looks like I don’t have an editor anymore. Am I my own editor now? I GUESS SO.  ANYWAYYYYYYYY I’m even still writing ANOTHER FACKING STORY. How many stories will I make and be UNFINISHED FOR LAIF!? Well the new one makes me think of complicated things or… something. It’s like something to do with a rose with… poisonous thorns and a magic spell. WTF IDK ANYMORE. But I was just… just… YOU KNOW WUT. I have to freewrite. It’s so hard for me to do that. WHY ARE YOU SO COMPLICATED. Okay, calm. I wanted to make an outline. Then I can freewrite liek a mothafackar. OKAY OUTLINE!! I already have a title, yo. The Curse of the Prince (or should it be The Prince’s Curse? Damnit I already made a logo fuuuuck)

  1. Intro (obviously)
    1. First, you go to school. And yea. You go to school.
    2. Making a new friend? AND SEE A FRIGGIN HAWT GUY.
    3. Finding that hawt guy like an uber stalker.
    4. Get infatuated by that hawt guy and say “DAMNIT I WANT HIM TO ************** ME!!” (that’s not really in the story sadly)
    5. He acts like he likes you but in reality HE DOESN’T. Whyohwhy…
    6. He walks you home and gives you a rose WITH MAGICAL POWERESSSS
    7. Then… AND THEN… IT HAPPENS. Wait, what happens? THE END.
  2. Next part, idk what.

You know… idk anymore!! Just still on the writing stage of the visual novel. I keep getting excited about the game and make tons of pictures and programming stuff. JUST WRITE THE FUCKING STORY LOL. Ah. Okay, I guess I’m done.

Outlining, writing, and more writing…

Finally, I actually made an outline for the new game/visual novel, Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~. Sort of changed a few things. As usual, I’m struggling with making the characters’ personalities. BUT anyway…


Ana gets captivated by Rin, who she met at the school roof, and when her boyfriend Ken sees them together, he misunderstands the situation and thinks she’s cheating on him. The two broke up and Ana wanted revenge to show that he will regret breaking up with her. Ana’s cousin Risa made a “love test” to see if Ken still has feelings for her by having a fake (popular) boyfriend, Rin and looking as if she happy with him when in actuality she has no feelings for him, but will that “love test” really succeed?


Erm, I hope that synopsis wasn’t too confusing. I got the outline down, but not the synopsis. How the story will go…

  1. Prologue: Dreaming about… what will happen in the future!
  2. Chapter 1: The break up? The “new boyfriend?”
  3. Chapter 2: Ken’s thoughts about what just happened.
  4. Chapter 3: How Ana acts with fake boyfriend
  5. Chapter 4: Ken’s thoughts about the two of them and what he does next
  6. Chapter 5: What the “love test” really is about
  7. Chapter 6: Is this fake boyfriend… not fake after all!?
  8. Chapter 7: Ken really doesn’t like seeing Ana with her “new boyfriend!”
  9. Epilogue: What will happen next!? Ken or Rin!?
  10. Several separate endings!

Wait, this is an outline right? IT IZ RAIT!? *gets stressed and passes out*

2As of now, the writing seems super boring. BUT. It’s just the draft for now. So… I think I’ll rewrite it however many times necessary, fix it up, once I’m finished writing the first time.

But seriously…

HOW DID MY WRITING SUDDENLY GET SO BORING!? 

I don’t get it. It must be because of the “break up.” Plus the relationship (dull relationship). How can I write a dull relationship more exciting? I DUN FACKING KNOE.

I’m not sure if this is an otome game/visual novel anymore (GxB game) because there’s going to be 2 narrators, Ana and Ken (girl and boy) which means… GxB and BxG. How… does that… happen…!? It’s partially otome? ……………………..WHATEVER.

After all the writing I was doing with Virtual Boyfriend: Secret Diary NAO I haz 2 RAIT MOAR AGEN for a different game…

BLARGHH. *falls on bed and becomes a hibernating bear*

Making a GxB visual novel? Odd Love Test!

Hmm… a new romance GxB game “Odd Love Test.” this was sort of happening to me (and probably others) in real life: to make the guy you confessed to (but got rejected) like you back/jealous, sometimes, we can flirt around with another guy. MAYBE. Just maybe. He might want your attention back to him. Don’t know how guys think though. Maybe they actually don’t think much about it at all and in the end, we’re trying too hard for nothing!

“Hey, guy, wanna be my boyfriend?” PFFT not that I like you…!!
“Sure, I guess…
“WHAT DO YOU MEAN ‘I GUESS!?’ You think I’m an easy girl!?
“N-no, I didn’t mean that—”
“FINE. FORGET IT!!*stomps away but regrets it and begs for ex’s love instead*

Wrote a story like this when I was a kid, so thought of making it again, but sort of different.
AT FIRST…


Odd Love Test: It was about a story of a single girl Rikki who saw a guy at the park she thinks is really attractive. This guy Jui was playing a game: the love test. The friend of Jui, Yuki and her workers that created “love test” wanted to see if Jui can get a random girl to love him. As soon as the girl falls in love with him, he should dump her right there and then. Every move he makes on Rikki is being video recorded. The more Jui got to know Rikki, the more he fell in love with her and couldn’t dump her like he’s supposed to in this “love test.” When Yuki found out that he’s actually in love with Rikki according to the recorded video, she had no choice but to…!! (unfinished)


The story was unfinished… I never found out what was supposed to happen in the end. *facerice*

But I thought it was weird. I didn’t really understand it. “WHAT WORKER!? IS THIS A COMPANY TO SEE HOW STUPID GUYS ARE SOMETIMES?” “No, it’s just to see how stupid you are.”

This time, the new story, is about…


Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~: A girl named Ana gets dumped by her boyfriend Ken at her high school being told she’s too clingy and wants to be free from her. Ana was disappointed, thinking she didn’t do anything wrong and wanted him back, but her cousin Risa told her that she should make him jealous by getting with another guy.

Risa wants Ana to make the popular guy in her class, Rin, Ana’s fake boyfriend. Surprisingly, Rin accepts her fake confession. Risa says if Ken shows any signs of wanting Ana back, Ana should dump Rin, but Ana wonders if thats what she should really do, because she’s developing feelings for Rin. Now, she doesn’t know what to do, because there are two guys she can’t decide being with…!!


61Uh, something like that… Now I’m getting confused again. I feel like falling asleep because I don’t know what it’s about again. WHAT IS THIS STORY ABOUT AGAIN!? I DON’T EVEN—

IT… It just looks like a naive girl doesn’t know what she’s doing and doesn’t know what she wants… in life…

I wonder who the antagonist is… Ana’s cousin Risa… screwing up her love life? Risa wants to mess with her head and now Ana doesn’t know what to do with choosing Rin and Ken? I don’t know anymore! Maybe… she wants everyone to hate her if she dumps the popular guy…?

Okay, whatever. I’ll… fall asleep again and think of something. Thinking of complicated things makes me tired!

Wait… is this really that complicated?

Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~

“Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~”

Developer: AMiPON!
License: CC-BY-NC (Non-commercial)
Genre: Romantic comedy, Visual novel
Rating: 12+
Release Date: TBA
Platforms: Windows, Mac OS X, Linux
Engine: Ren’Py

Ana just broke up with her boyfriend Ken and her cousin Risa made a “love test” to see if Ken still loves her. Will that “love test” really work, or will she end up falling in love with someone else?

*to be updated*

Background story + get with all the guys!

Itsuka: “PEACE AHHOUUUTT!!
Shinji: “You don’t get to peace out.”
Ichiro: “She isn’t talking to you. She wants to peace out with me.”
Itsuka: “Wait, what?
Mana: “Why does SHE get all the guys and not me!?*goes psycho*

I just… wanted to explain the random picture…

Made a little story of Itsuka’s past and now she gets to be cutesy with all the guys! The guy who is supposed to be her real father is actually a teacher at her school who used to be her guardian (took care of her when she was little), BUT she forgot because she got amnesia in a car accident.

56She doesn’t know anything. Only her teacher and Ichiro, her older brother. The teacher, Tetsuya took both of them in when their parents died. Her mother died when she gave birth to her, and the father committed suicide. They were abandoned on the street when the couple (Tetsuya and his girlfriend) found them.

The girlfriend of Tetsuya was going to drive Itsuka to school and the two of them suddenly got into a car accident because she’s emotionally unstable after the fight she got in with Tetsuya. After that, Tetsuya decided that he can’t handle her emotional issues and separated from her, only taking Ichiro with him.

WHY did he want to take care of one of the kids and not leave both with his ex?

He’s afraid that he might take advantage of the girl when she’s older who isn’t his real daughter. He insisted on taking care of the kids when he saw they were abandoned, so he should at least take care of the boy, Ichiro.

This seems a bit weird to me. Honestly, I was trying to make a story where Itsuka can end up with him and not as her real father. So… this is what happened when I tried to come up with it.

But the previous story was!!

Itsuka’s mother died and the father couldn’t take care of two kids. He didn’t like Itsuka because she “caused” his wife’s death. He sent her away to a friend far from where he lives and asked her to take care of her instead. Even though he doesn’t like her, he didn’t want to just leave her on the streets. So, she was left with the mother and her other child, who is now Itsuka’s brother.

She has no father to take care of her now, because her step mother divorced her husband. Her husband took a lot of the money with him, and now Itsuka’s step family is broke.

WHY did Itsuka’s real father want to leave her with a poor family?

He wants his friend to know his hate for her too, because that friend now needs to take care of two kids and she’s emotionally unstable even with taking care of her real child. He wants Itsuka to suffer like he did when his wife died.

Wait a second… has this story ever been this… dark or tragic? I NEVAR THAHT AHBAOT EETTT!! *stupid face*

BUT ANYWAY. I took out one guy in the story, Aki, her step brother. Unless he can just be some random guy she always sees, like if you take the train, she sees him all the time and he gives you advice or something. Like, talking to strangers…

Itsuka: “GAWD my mom at home is so STOOOPID.”
Aki: “Hit her in the face with a wake-up-to-reality punch when she’s out of control.”
Itsuka: “Thanks, stranger! I think I will! Goodbye, whoever you are!”

Then, coincidentally! She meets the stranger again! “It…was fate…!”

I don’t think I made much progress with writing the draft. Only coming up with ideas! Okay. That’s enough. I shouldn’t be writing so much in here. But. I am.

Virtual Boyfriend: Secret Diary

“Virtual Boyfriend: Secret Diary”

Developer: AMiPON!
License: CC-BY-NC (Non-commercial)
Genre: Romantic comedy
Rating: 15+
Release Date: TBA
Platforms: Windows, Mac OS X, Linux
Engine: Ren’Py

Before Itsuka left for her last day of high school, she finds 11 journal entries on her laptop—all saved in the first two weeks of February last year—but realizes that all of the entries about her first boyfriend during her second year are unfinished. Itsuka has vivid images of those times that she might be able to finish the entries by reminiscing, but will they be the same from what really happened? Is she really just reminiscing or is everything she “remembers” actually reality?

See Works in Progress posts
Check out the Original Comic

*to be updated*