The Sunset? Just a short story!

This story is something i wrote when i was a kid. I wanna tweak it up a bit though! It’s called The Sunset!


One morning, I was on a ship headed to an island somewhere in the middle of the ocean. The ship we were on was as big as a four-story mansion! I was with some of my friends, a lot of my relatives, and my family. We packed food, clothes, shelter—like blankets, pillows, and some games to play—while we were on the ship.

I miss my home and everyone that didn’t come with us, because we’ll be there for a week. When the ship was ready to go, I was already bored. While we were sailing the ocean, I saw a lot of fog covering the horizon. I could barely see the sky.

A few hours later, the ship was going all over the place and losing its balance! I sat down on a chair going back and forth while playing games I brought with me. All of a sudden, the ship was tilting and my stomach was hurting! My friends didn’t feel a thing, because they’re all sleeping.

At sundown, I finished eating an early dinner and followed one of my friends to the outer front of the ship. I noticed most of my friends and family went back to their rooms looking like they don’t care about anything but sleep. The second I stopped and looked out, I saw a beautiful sunset. I noticed most of my friends and family went back to their rooms without caring about the scenery outside.

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We finally got to our destination, and seeing the pretty sunset on that attractive island was definitely paradise. I still enjoyed it when everyone woke up, and it became more exciting when we were all together. My friends, family, and I headed to our hotel rooms, but I had to take one more look towards the ocean before that pretty sight goes all the way down.

Looking out my hotel room’s window, it already became dark, but I still have that sunset stuck in my head like gum. I went to sleep that night and hoped I will continue to remember that horizon tomorrow and in the future. But tomorrow… I’ll have fun the whole day at the beach!!


THE END! Sadly, I don’t remember the sunset from that long ago. Booooooo. AND I don’t remember that memory of going on the ship with my friends and family. WELL THAT SUCKS.

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