How many times…!! THIS STORY!!

(I almost forgot my password…)

UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I don’t remember the last time I actually finished a story. WHY have I NOT!? I made a new one about some girl. Trying to be successful!! Because I’M TRYING TO, DAMNIT!

Well, I at least made some of the characters but then I keep changing my mind because of some stuff I’ve seen in other stories. I’m like, HAY DIS IS MAI STORIE. Why am I trying to copy other stories? UGH. Pain in the ARSE.

OK MAYBE… if it makes it easier…
I’ll just write a story like I’m writing in a blog such as this. Yea. Then I’ll go back and rewrite it. Yea. Sounds good. Cuz I type faster if it’s like… a journal.

SOMEONE PUNISH ME if I fail this time.

So the thing with this story, I already typed a lot of it up in the Ren’Py visual novel maker thing. I included choices to choose from like for example…

“If I want to look successful, I should…”

  1. Apply for a job
  2. Find a sugar daddy
  3. Buy stylish clothes
  4. Ask advice from a friend

Something like that! And then some random COOL Computer Graphic ART!

BAM

idol

I made too many random artwork for the story… am I even gonna finish it!?

eh.

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Finally! *attempts to make mystery novel*

In my previous post, I was writing in 2nd person narrative. I SUCK AT IT. *rage quit* So, I went with 1st person narrative, something I’m actually good at…

In this story, I’m writing a mystery novel. I’ve actually never really wrote any mystery novels. I only just like mystery stuff. So, I went to this site to give me tips on how to write a mystery. I thought it’s really helpful. BUT even though I read it, I probably won’t even write a good mystery in the end. I’M JEST LIEK DAT OHKAY!? 

It’s my first time
This tip is helpful.
ORLY— *gets punched in the face*

Thankfully, this time, I managed to make a full outline before I started writing. Now, I’m writing it and I’m liek EZ PZ. But I got too excited again and made pictures for the game. WHY DO I TEND TO DO THAT UGH. But I at least made the prologue! It’s like, super short though. I already tested it out (game version) and put in some creepy music and I’m like…

NOOOOOOO THIS IS SCARY! HALP ME.
You shouldn’t have put in that creepy music in the first place, dumbass.

Then I text my cousin saying how scared I am but that didn’t make me feel any better… she at least pointed out how hot the weather is today to make me stop thinking about the scariness. She’s so sweet~

So far, I have 1k words…. THAT’S NOT EVEN ENOUGH FOR A DAMN PROLOGUE.
But… it’s a super short story
DON’T “SUPER SHORT STORY” ME!!

I planned for it to be only 10k words. I wonder if I’d even reach that far or if… if it really will be under 10k words? For some reason, it might seem long. It looks like there’s two parts to the game. DAMNIT I DIDN’T WANT DISSSSSsssssS.

But… I’m happy to at least have “something” to write about. Yayness.

Outlining, writing, and more writing…

Finally, I actually made an outline for the new game/visual novel, Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~. Sort of changed a few things. As usual, I’m struggling with making the characters’ personalities. BUT anyway…


Ana gets captivated by Rin, who she met at the school roof, and when her boyfriend Ken sees them together, he misunderstands the situation and thinks she’s cheating on him. The two broke up and Ana wanted revenge to show that he will regret breaking up with her. Ana’s cousin Risa made a “love test” to see if Ken still has feelings for her by having a fake (popular) boyfriend, Rin and looking as if she happy with him when in actuality she has no feelings for him, but will that “love test” really succeed?


Erm, I hope that synopsis wasn’t too confusing. I got the outline down, but not the synopsis. How the story will go…

  1. Prologue: Dreaming about… what will happen in the future!
  2. Chapter 1: The break up? The “new boyfriend?”
  3. Chapter 2: Ken’s thoughts about what just happened.
  4. Chapter 3: How Ana acts with fake boyfriend
  5. Chapter 4: Ken’s thoughts about the two of them and what he does next
  6. Chapter 5: What the “love test” really is about
  7. Chapter 6: Is this fake boyfriend… not fake after all!?
  8. Chapter 7: Ken really doesn’t like seeing Ana with her “new boyfriend!”
  9. Epilogue: What will happen next!? Ken or Rin!?
  10. Several separate endings!

Wait, this is an outline right? IT IZ RAIT!? *gets stressed and passes out*

2As of now, the writing seems super boring. BUT. It’s just the draft for now. So… I think I’ll rewrite it however many times necessary, fix it up, once I’m finished writing the first time.

But seriously…

HOW DID MY WRITING SUDDENLY GET SO BORING!? 

I don’t get it. It must be because of the “break up.” Plus the relationship (dull relationship). How can I write a dull relationship more exciting? I DUN FACKING KNOE.

I’m not sure if this is an otome game/visual novel anymore (GxB game) because there’s going to be 2 narrators, Ana and Ken (girl and boy) which means… GxB and BxG. How… does that… happen…!? It’s partially otome? ……………………..WHATEVER.

After all the writing I was doing with Virtual Boyfriend: Secret Diary NAO I haz 2 RAIT MOAR AGEN for a different game…

BLARGHH. *falls on bed and becomes a hibernating bear*

Making a GxB visual novel? Odd Love Test!

Hmm… a new romance GxB game “Odd Love Test.” this was sort of happening to me (and probably others) in real life: to make the guy you confessed to (but got rejected) like you back/jealous, sometimes, we can flirt around with another guy. MAYBE. Just maybe. He might want your attention back to him. Don’t know how guys think though. Maybe they actually don’t think much about it at all and in the end, we’re trying too hard for nothing!

“Hey, guy, wanna be my boyfriend?” PFFT not that I like you…!!
“Sure, I guess…
“WHAT DO YOU MEAN ‘I GUESS!?’ You think I’m an easy girl!?
“N-no, I didn’t mean that—”
“FINE. FORGET IT!!*stomps away but regrets it and begs for ex’s love instead*

Wrote a story like this when I was a kid, so thought of making it again, but sort of different.
AT FIRST…


Odd Love Test: It was about a story of a single girl Rikki who saw a guy at the park she thinks is really attractive. This guy Jui was playing a game: the love test. The friend of Jui, Yuki and her workers that created “love test” wanted to see if Jui can get a random girl to love him. As soon as the girl falls in love with him, he should dump her right there and then. Every move he makes on Rikki is being video recorded. The more Jui got to know Rikki, the more he fell in love with her and couldn’t dump her like he’s supposed to in this “love test.” When Yuki found out that he’s actually in love with Rikki according to the recorded video, she had no choice but to…!! (unfinished)


The story was unfinished… I never found out what was supposed to happen in the end. *facerice*

But I thought it was weird. I didn’t really understand it. “WHAT WORKER!? IS THIS A COMPANY TO SEE HOW STUPID GUYS ARE SOMETIMES?” “No, it’s just to see how stupid you are.”

This time, the new story, is about…


Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~: A girl named Ana gets dumped by her boyfriend Ken at her high school being told she’s too clingy and wants to be free from her. Ana was disappointed, thinking she didn’t do anything wrong and wanted him back, but her cousin Risa told her that she should make him jealous by getting with another guy.

Risa wants Ana to make the popular guy in her class, Rin, Ana’s fake boyfriend. Surprisingly, Rin accepts her fake confession. Risa says if Ken shows any signs of wanting Ana back, Ana should dump Rin, but Ana wonders if thats what she should really do, because she’s developing feelings for Rin. Now, she doesn’t know what to do, because there are two guys she can’t decide being with…!!


61Uh, something like that… Now I’m getting confused again. I feel like falling asleep because I don’t know what it’s about again. WHAT IS THIS STORY ABOUT AGAIN!? I DON’T EVEN—

IT… It just looks like a naive girl doesn’t know what she’s doing and doesn’t know what she wants… in life…

I wonder who the antagonist is… Ana’s cousin Risa… screwing up her love life? Risa wants to mess with her head and now Ana doesn’t know what to do with choosing Rin and Ken? I don’t know anymore! Maybe… she wants everyone to hate her if she dumps the popular guy…?

Okay, whatever. I’ll… fall asleep again and think of something. Thinking of complicated things makes me tired!

Wait… is this really that complicated?

Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~

“Odd Love Test ~a taste of sweet revenge~”

Developer: AMiPON!
License: CC-BY-NC (Non-commercial)
Genre: Romantic comedy, Visual novel
Rating: 12+
Release Date: TBA
Platforms: Windows, Mac OS X, Linux
Engine: Ren’Py

Ana just broke up with her boyfriend Ken and her cousin Risa made a “love test” to see if Ken still loves her. Will that “love test” really work, or will she end up falling in love with someone else?

*to be updated*

This is getting boring! Or am I just not too into it?

I feel like I really need to change my writing style. It’s getting really boring and annoying when I read it and write my story. BUT I AT LEAST… have 7,089 words

But seriously, I was just like… I NEED TO WRITE LIKE I DO IN MY JOURNAL. Then when I write, it’s all serious and GETS BORING DAMN YOU.

I’m still on Day 1 (Chapter 1) and since it’s a dating sim, I’m all like, “is this just… gonna happen EVERY single day? THIS BORINGNESS!?”46Virtual Boyfriend: Secret Diary. Should I also change the title, like how it’s written? I won’t change the full words, I mean I feel like I should take out the “:” and put in something else… LIKE Virtual Boyfriend -Secret Diary- or Virtual Boyfriend ~Secret Diary~ or Virtual Boyfriend *Secret Diary* or… okay. I don’t know.

Well then. I think I need to figure out more on how the story goes, not just my writing style. It’s pretty much the story that MIGHT end up getting boring. So, the order of the first day…

  1. Checking horoscope on how the day would go,
  2. eating breakfast/skipping breakfast/forgetting lunch
  3. going to school (usually late),
  4. meeting with a guy she “hates” and a new guy,
  5. going to P.E. without a P.E. uniform (no, she didn’t go to P.E. naked),
  6. having mini games (like when going to lunch, playing basketball in P.E., working at a restaurant to get money),
  7. cleaning the school,
  8. hanging out with her friends (but what to do…),
  9. going to work to get money,
  10. go home to talk to online boyfriend or just sleep.

I guess that’s… what I have planned for almost everyday. But if it’s everyday… wouldn’t that seem boring? That’s what I’m thinking.

I’m probably not gonna ask my teenage editor, showing her what I have and asking her what I have to do anymore. My other editor needs to see everything I have, or else I’m gonna go crazy out of my mind cuz I wouldn’t know what this outline should be like, or if I even need to do the exact same thing everyday.

Okay… uh… I’ll just make it sound like Itsuka is talking/narrating as if she’s writing in her journal for the whole day. I’ll see how it turns out…

I’ll hope if I do that, I can type faster!

I actually made some progress… It’s a miracle.

Itsuka “I did it, big brother! I’m in the 2,120 words eevee wrote!”
Ichiro “That’s great. Now give me a hug.”
Mana “Why does she get a hug and not me!?” *feels alone*
EeveeI SHOULD BE SAYING THAT.” *bitch slaps Mana*40_002

Yesterday night, I was typing up my story and I was just freewriting. Then I realized, “HAY I WRITE SO MUCH FASTER WHEN I DON’T GIVE A FUCK.” But when I do… I can write only like at least 100 words. Yesterday, I wrote 1,300 words. So, I was like, “2MARO I WILL RITE 5,000 WARDSS!!

I think it happened because I was told to just write like… crazy then go back to edit it later. Looks like this visual novel should be at least (since there are 5 routes aside from common route)… 180,000 words. If 50,000 for each (like I planned before), 300,000 words.

*vomit* WTF why do I need to write SO MANY FUCKING WORDS!?
“You need to write at least 30,000 words for each route! Or maybe 50,000!
“DAMN YOU I DON’T HAVE TAIM 4 DIS.”
“Then what do you have time for!?”
“………..I guess I’ll need to write at least 30,000 words.” *sad face*

I WONDER if I can finish the common route before December! Then I can finally write the other routes.

Wait, I shouldn’t be saying all this yet. OR should I? Well this is liek my BLAHG so I sey wut I wantz. Time to write again. I better make it 5,000 words this time!!